This is a good path for you, clearly I can see some cool points in this piece and you're creative enough for sure.
Your line work looks cool. Perspective is missing, you should check some tuts about this topic, your images would improve a lot.
The color values aren't there yet. Meaning, there is a great separation on your front element, ground and background. The background for example is to of a strong dark/red color, things get fadded at a distance.
If you like this kind of work, visit youtube, search Feng Zhu for exemple and check is episodes. You'll learn a lot.
Impact is your strongest asset on this piece. the mistic and glow felling is really cool and well done.
Tech issues aside I really like this one!